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Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons (Zoo Southside, Edinburgh)

An assured debut play presents an effective allegory for austerity

Beth Holmes in Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons
Beth Holmes in Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons
Economy of language is everything in Sam Steiner's accomplished debut, written while still a student at Warwick University. Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons posits a state-imposed word-limit – just 140 a day – and teases out the implications, blossoming into a seething critique of austerity politics. Force people to live under arbitrary constraints and you essentially dehumanise them.

Bernadette (Beth Holmes) and Oliver (Euan Kitson) are a young couple learning to live within their linguistic means under the Quietude Bill. They develop a shorthand to scrimp on their words – 'loveou' for 'I love you' – and keep schtum at work for a conversation at home. With limited resources, you have to make choices: career or relationship, this word or that? Can you mourn a lost pet or is that self-indulgent? The very process of choosing is a drain in itself. Sex becomes silent and stuttering; relationships, imbalanced; protest, impossible. Life grows self-conscious and the world seems to shrink, reduced by reductive language.

'It's bright, light and sharp – a rom-com with smarts'

Jumping back and forth either side of the Hush Law's introduction, Lemons… lets you see what you've got before its gone. Bernadette and Oliver – she's a lawyer, he's an activist, both reliant on language – spew words around in a world where talk is cheap. It's not hard to spot the parallels with the babble and blather of social media, all that content-free content and online 'opinion'.

It's smart on the language of love too: the way private terminologies and in-jokes emerge, then come to define, even to carry, a relationship, and the sincere 'I love yous' that get passed on like batons. You really tune into the writing too: the number of first-person pronouns that flutter through the text, the double meanings and synonyms.

Occasionally, the austerity allegory screams like a boiling kettle, and you can spot Steiner's spider-diagram of themes rather easily. It's a play that skims the surface, rather than digging deep, but it's bright, light and sharp – a rom-com with smarts.

Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons, Lemons runs at Zoo Southside until 22 August